Wow. This is such a nice Kokame story! It has something so realistic that I can't help but love it, just because I can see it all happening! I love how you let their relationship develop from hate to love, and what I like the most about this story is when Kame tells everyone he's going to be in Shuji to Akira. I adore this part because Koki isn't being all nice and sweet about it, he's angry and even though he probably likes Kame, he still wants Kame to fix it. He doesn't console him like a baby and that's GOOD.
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Date: 2011-04-23 06:10 pm (UTC)Thank you for this. I needed some good Kokame.