I really liked the way you showed their differences, and at the same time showed how they got to know each other. Knowing what would happen with Yuuki...and why he wanted Yuya to stay...just set the scene for the end. And I love the idea that his surfboard ended up as a memorial. Lovely writing!
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Date: 2011-01-16 11:05 am (UTC)